RE: ¿Goku, will he be able to defeat the monster Buyon?
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I loved the way you wrote about this chapter! It was good that Goku had the presence of mind to do something with all that ice in the fight with Buyon. Octavio’s act of bravery was also a sweet moment, proof that he wasn’t just a coward after all. I also enjoyed how you tied the mayor’s daughter into Goku’s previous rescue, good emotional bridging in the story. Reading your reactions feels like rewatching Dragon Ball from the beginning through someone else’s eyes. Looking forward to how you write him meeting Bulma!
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Hi @shoyebxyz, I love your comment, because it shows you've seen and enjoyed everything I've been writing. Sometimes, my opinion takes precedence over the moments experienced by the characters that motivate me the most. In this chapter, I noticed a lot of emotion from Octavio, whom I called a coward for his reactions, repeated since he met Goku, and then the expression on my monkey-tailed boy's face when his beloved flying cloud returns. Aside from the gratitude from the mayor and his family... This chapter was very nice. Wait until you see that reunion. I haven't seen it yet... Greetings and love.