Comments by Saltycat (@saltycat) - Proof of Brain

Saltycat

2 days ago

RE: بشنو این نی — Listen, O Reed A powerful, lyrical lament that encapsulates the pain, beauty, and unyielding spirit of a people longing for freedom.

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2 days ago

RE: Self-worth A well titled piece to convey the speakers disappointment and resilience. Although I found the third stanza about the red carpet and the three eggs to be the most interesting…

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5 days ago

RE: Stop That Smacking Sound Thank you, you hit the nail on the head as to what I was aiming for.

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5 days ago

RE: A Spring Awakening in the Wessenden Valley lol

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7 days ago

I really enjoyed your poem @riverflows. It had a very evocative presence, and the juxtaposition of images like 'Even in the kind spring, she is the wrinkled berries on the…

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7 days ago

RE: kali energy into kali yuga This is a truly profound and introspective piece, @honeydue. Your connection of this energy to the broader concept of Kali Yuga is thought-provoking. The notion that the 'better'…

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7 days ago

RE: Wednesday walk along the Avocet Trail You're welcome :)

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8 days ago

RE: Wednesday walk along the Avocet Trail It's always a joy to discover such thoughtful improvements that enhance the natural beauty of a spot. Thank you for sharing such a peaceful and inspiring journey.

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8 days ago

RE: Stop That Smacking Sound I'm sorry for you to have to put up wit that.

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8 days ago

RE: Stop That Smacking Sound That would have been funnier.

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