RE: Cindy and the boat cruise.
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This was such an engaging read. I could almost hear the preacher’s voice “echoing like a trumpet on the day of resurrection.” The suspense as you followed the mother’s narration kept me hooked. The twist about Cindy spending days at her boyfriend’s boat cruise instead of the store was unexpected. I liked how you captured the emotions of worry, relief, and even anger so vividly.
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Thank you