RE: Sunset Dreaming -A Poetic Practise

Hello @akumagai , after reading your poem, I allowed myself to analyze it and this is what I found:

The poem seems to speak about the constant search for a goal and the importance of finding inner calm. The use of short lines conveys a sense of simplicity and clarity. The poem also uses images from nature, such as birds and the sea, to convey a sense of tranquility and harmony. The speaker seems to be saying that finding inner peace and calm is important, even if things are not perfect and do not always rhyme. Overall, the poem conveys a positive message and a sense of the importance of finding inner peace.

I enjoyed reading it, thank you so much for sharing quality poetry.

Best regards