Sunset Dreaming -A Poetic Practise

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Peace of mind
That I seek all the time
Pursuing a goal to find
Even when things don't rhyme

Lazing about whiling the day
Tomorrow comes what may
Any which way
Yesterday was once today

Even birds go home at night
Refuge from anything that fight
Especially when they lose their sight
This I know it's right.

No noise but the sea
Like looking at premonitions tea
Drinking gross you but you're free
Just got wait and see

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Hello @akumagai , after reading your poem, I allowed myself to analyze it and this is what I found:

The poem seems to speak about the constant search for a goal and the importance of finding inner calm. The use of short lines conveys a sense of simplicity and clarity. The poem also uses images from nature, such as birds and the sea, to convey a sense of tranquility and harmony. The speaker seems to be saying that finding inner peace and calm is important, even if things are not perfect and do not always rhyme. Overall, the poem conveys a positive message and a sense of the importance of finding inner peace.

I enjoyed reading it, thank you so much for sharing quality poetry.

Best regards

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Good analyses of my poem, I a happy you got what I am trying to convey in as small a parcel as I can with a whole lot of punch for the amount I am writing.

I am glad you enjoyed the poem.

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The peace that nature brings can be compared to none.

We all choose peace over everything any day and any time.

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Yesterday was indeed today and vice versa. There's then need to make the best of it before it's dawn when just like the birds we'll return.

Great poem

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Thank you very much, glad you liked the poem.

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