RE: Balena / Swallow-Me-Sojourner
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Every language you speak grants you an extra life; as we tend to say.
Thank your Romanian mouth for summoning the balenă; it's usually just a giant fish in English. And then... well the freewrite would flow, swim, and eventually dive another direction I guess :)
It feels more terse than the other pieces of yours. No seemingly neverending sentences, serpets wraping around the readers mind here.
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It felt terse to me, too. Maybe in Romanian, I'm terse and sad. Who knows.
I like that quote. I wrote it down on a piece of paper in my head but then misplaced it. Thank you for reminding me.
While your English prose poetry brimms with joy and happiness :)
Finally. Someone who sees me for who I really am ✨️
Oh wow, do I? :)