Replies to Elvis Itoya (@elvishunchoo) - Proof of Brain

Elvis Itoya

Nigeria

An aspiring musical artiste | A writer

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18 days ago

RE: The Prank that went wrong Yeah, you and Victor were only trying to have fun. But using the teacher, Mr. Ken, for it, just for amusement was very wrong. And instead of lying that the other class did it…

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19 days ago

RE: The Prank that went wrong Life is not always about fun. When Victor blamed the other class, it showed he was scared and made a bad choice. But when Mr. Ken found out the truth, the laughter stopped. The…

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20 days ago

RE: The Family Curse Growing up in a family with so much sadness must have been really hard. It was smart of you to move away and try to start afresh. Sometimes you try to run from your problems but…

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20 days ago

RE: The Family Curse

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20 days ago

RE: The Family Curse Hello @elvishunchoo, You tag this story as nonfiction, but it sounds like fiction. Is this a true story, a story about your life, or is it made up? Thanks.

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20 days ago

RE: The Family Curse The part where the great-grandfather wrote about taking the fertile land for blood was so powerful. It explains the family’s pain and fear so clearly. I like how you ended with…

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22 days ago

RE: You won't know how much it hurts until it happens to you or you practice empathy. Having friends who will convert for you is one of the best things a time can ever wish for. Thanks for stopping by.

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22 days ago

RE: Loose mouths Yes but some people would rather make it worse, there are a whole lot of people like that in the world and it's really sad.

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25 days ago

RE: Crossing paths

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@quincykristoffer 0

25 days ago

RE: Crossing paths The museum scene reminds me of one twilight zone episode where a guy was in a loop, meeting the same girl each time. Side note: The story feels rushed, so I couldn't see the…

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