RE: The Visionary That Got The Short Straw

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Thanks @agmoore for reading my story. I'm glad you found it interesting. I'm sorry I left the readers with questions at the end. Well, if you will, here it is: Eric, after having a conversation with his wife, decided to go underground for a considerable amount of time. Since Tao's vision had to be achieved at all costs, Eric decided he would go dark so he can build connections with people in high places who, with their power and influence could help him achieve that vision. His pan was to do everything to get them to believe in the vision. He was ready to sacrifice even his life to get the vision achieved.

Should I add this part to the story?

Thanks for stopping by.

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You take my critique with good grace. I wouldn't make such a suggestion to someone who wouldn't understand how to go forward. It is an issue that @jayna addressed in one of her writing tips. She talks in the essay about completing an arc with a satisfying resolution.

There is no need to tack on an ending now. This critique is for future stories.

Thank you for taking the time to come up with such a creative ending.

Have a great evening.

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I'm glad you loved the ending I wrote. Thanks for your constructive comment, you support means a lot. Thanks for the tip too, @agmoore.

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