Tattoos Of Injustice: A Poetry

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Tegil dîr i bâr ú-gurth,

Teithannen an naeth an-nûr.

Lîn lost i ‘ûr prestannen,

Gwenin dannen i galar thîr.

I ardh trel ú-thîr na bêd,

Bôr i rem dan i mae.

Gûr nestannen dîn i thalos,

Ceryn dangen ah vinyaur.

I togol a’ i bereth danned,

Nîf no thiad trî i athrad dann.

Harn nestannen galar thîr,

Gûr begrannen no i iest thîr.

Maethar ah tegil garn i bôr,

Naeth a’ i ‘ûr beriannen tôl.

Tôl nîf dhîn, nestannen ah aeg,

Gûr bereth a’ i athrad lîr.

English

Burnt deep within,

A shadowed ink

Of sorrow stains...

Etched by hands,

Lips that drink

Sorrow & pain.

O wanderer

See for yerself,

The weight

Upon the body

So fragile.

Truth kneels,

Before thrones,

Whilst justice

Sleeps...

Bloody tyrants

Paint lawns in gold,

And yet ink suffers.

A wound

Is not just flesh,

Silence sings

Upon stones.

A world that watches,

Untold sufferings...

Unmoved.

Yet love remains,

Somewhere flickering

Deep within the shadows,

We seek to abandon,

To turn this ink here,

Into a blooming star.

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Subject: Struggle of the weak against the mighty.


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I honestly thought the subject was about life turning to criminal acts, until the last message that clarified it. Though you might want to use one picture for your poetry, too much is too unnecessary, unless you were aiming to make it connect with each verse.

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Sure, suggestions taken thanks for reading the poetry. I keep experimenting with new styles. Stay tuned for more 😊

Note: It's actually quite metaphorical so I don't blame the reader for not understanding the subject in the first go 🙏

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