WHO A MAN IS
Shout out to the backbone of the society On whose responsibility lies the hidden fears and anxiety,
The immunity tears buy
One who holds the truth when its dark And no one dares to ignite a spark, Infallible figure whose emotions are dead
A villain expected to star ahead
To be guilty until proven innocent
To answer when disaster seems imminent
A shield from the burns of the sun
A wheel with nowhere to run
A gem so proud in his ego and skin
Who sacrifices his life for the next of kin
A rock where foundation begin
That's who he is
For he is him in his every own rights
A man, a legend, a king!
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May I make a suggestion that you start a new line when you capitalise a new word as this can cause gramatical confusion
Wow!
An amazing way to describe a man.
I especially admire this line:
"A villain expected to start ahead"
I also like this line:
"A gem so proud in his ego and skin, who sacrifices his life for the next of kin.
The rhyming words are beautiful, it definitely depicts all the sacrifices of a good father, brother, husband, uncle and every pure, strong, and loving men.
This is an amazing write up.
Well done.
Thanks for stopping by , I'm glad you could relate. Men should not be excluded from being celebrated, as much as the girl child is important, the boy child is highly indispensable as well.
Exactly, men is equally important in the family and society at large. The father's should be celebrated as well
This is a great line, says so much 'A gem so proud in his ego and skin, Who sacrifices his life for the next of kin'.
Good picture as well to go with it.