Reformed || [Eng/Esp]

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She gazed at them with a stoic smile on her face, but her insides seethed with fury. Heaven knew how hard it was to keep the mask of the perfect Sunday school teacher. She’d watched from the side for so long as these people raised set after set of depraved teens. Teens, she was sure were reeking with the stench of debauchery. In their thoughts and very much so in their words as they whispered excitedly to each other.

But all that was about to change. She was going to bring a change. She’d been called into this job for a reason.

Superintendent of The Church of the Saved.

She deserved a crown on her head and possibly a throne. But here she was, in the dingy little room where Sunday school classes were held for three hours, teaching miscreants who may or may not resist her ways of teaching. But she knew that wouldn’t happen. Her methods of teaching compelled obedience, servitude, and submission.

She would turn the delinquents into model Christian youths soon enough. The noses in the air, the superficial look about them, the pungent smell of vanity, they would all be extinguished soon enough. She would...

“Maam...” a girl called out, snapping her out of her thoughts. And just when it was getting good too. “As much as we’d like to look at you for the duration of the three hours, we’d also appreciate if you could just get on with the class.”

Superintendent Maria went so still, you could mistake her for a corpse. And then, a Cheshire-cat-worthy smirk swept her face as she looked at the gangly-looking teenager.

It seemed she’d just found her first victim.

Jhymi🖤


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Los miraba con una sonrisa estoica en el rostro, pero su interior hervía de furia. Dios sabía lo difícil que era mantener la máscara de la perfecta maestra de escuela dominical. Llevaba mucho tiempo observando de reojo cómo aquella gente criaba a un grupo tras otro de adolescentes depravados. Adolescentes que, estaba segura, apestaban con el hedor del libertinaje. En sus pensamientos y mucho más en sus palabras cuando susurraban excitadamente entre ellos.

Pero todo eso estaba a punto de cambiar. Ella iba a traer un cambio. Había sido llamada a este trabajo por una razón.

Superintendente de la Iglesia de los Salvados.

Merecía una corona sobre su cabeza y posiblemente un trono. Pero aquí estaba, en la pequeña y sucia habitación donde se impartían las clases de la escuela dominical durante tres horas, enseñando a bellacos que podrían o no resistirse a sus maneras de enseñar. Pero ella sabía que eso no ocurriría. Sus métodos de enseñanza obligaban a la obediencia, la servidumbre y la sumisión.

Pronto convertiría a los delincuentes en jóvenes cristianos modelo. Las narices en el aire, el aspecto superficial, el olor acre de la vanidad, todo se extinguiría muy pronto. Ella...

"Señora..." la llamó una chica, sacándola de sus pensamientos. Y justo cuando se estaba poniendo bueno también. "Aunque nos gustaría mirarla durante las tres horas, también le agradeceríamos que siguiera con la clase".

La superintendente María se quedó tan quieta que podías confundirla con un cadáver. Y entonces, una sonrisa digna de un gato de Cheshire se dibujó en su rostro mientras miraba al desgarbado adolescente.

Parecía que acababa de encontrar a su primera víctima.

Jhymi🖤


Translated with DeepL. This is my freewrite daily prompt by @marrianewest. And here's that of my most talented partner @deraaa. I hope you have fun reading her submission as well.


Image is mine.



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Bang, I did it again... I just rehived your post!
Week 169 of my contest just started...you can now check the winners of the previous week!
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Ha!!! Should I feel for this girl? This gives me vibes from a movie where the nuns and the whoever was in charge were nothing short of abusive! Jeez! Also, is it just me or have you improved a lot in your use of words? Well done sweetheart.

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Oh, I would definitely not want to watch that kind of movie. And I'm glad you like it and as for my use of words, maybe I was holding back?🥴
Thanks sweetie. I appreciate it.🌺

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Reviewed and Approved for an Ecency boost. Keep up the good work!

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Woooow! Scary, but in an exciting way

I have had my share of "Superintendent Maria" and they absolutely killed all the joy in Sunday children church.

Would there be a follow up episode?

Curious to see the showdown between Superintendent Maria and the "gangly-looking teenager."

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Yeah, I think we've had someone who projected all their life's disappointments on kids as their way of making themselves feel better. Terrible times.

Would there be a follow up episode?

I doubt. My head usually doesn't go beyond the plot I set.😄

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I feel you hold back from the exploration. The descriptive plot is set; like most gruesome plots to tame the shrew you could be inspired by such and blow our minds some more🤩

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Looks like all the bottled fury of the Sunday school teacher will burst forth soon like a shaken soda bottle

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A shaken soda bottle. Lol
That's a pretty neat imagery. I hope it doesn't though.✨

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🤩 I love the detailing, description of thoughts and the beautiful draw-in till the end of the story, being in the mind of the narrator and lost deeply with her was cool. Bravo deary👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

#dreemerforlife

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Thank you so much Whitney. I'm really glad you liked it. You're amazing.🌺

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The pleasure is mine. Thank you😊 You are amazing too 🌺💕

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She wished she could just find a way to get over these teens but you know it's actually quite hard to do so, I can feel her pain 🥺😂.

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You can feel her pain??
Hope, I'm beginning to suspect you.😂🙃

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Yes oo, lol 😂. Better stop suspecting me oo 😂

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Being a teen's Sunday teacher is hard.
Alas, she's found her first example hahaha. I feel her pain and
#dreemerforlife

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Okayy, this is a bit scary, I can't imagine what would happen to that little girl. Well done 👍
#dreemport

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