entry daily prompt: my other castle

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once again my timer is set so here goes:

i feel more at home here in my first castle. well it's not really a castle like my other one but it's more cozy and intimate here. lots of woodwork, of course there are quite a lot of silver ornaments but all my gold is in my other castle. it feels so shiny there, it's exciting and all and very prestigious but it's cold. such big rooms all glittering, i bring my guests there who i need to impress but the ones i really care about i invite here. like i said it's home. no amount of riches can replace the sense of belonging that i feel here.

this was the first time i ran out of words well ahead of time. suddenly nothing came to mind, maybe because the storyline was so far from reality...

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It's interesting to see you participate in freewrite story.
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thanks. it's not easy to get down my thoughts quickly. i am used to taking my time and editing as i go or at least afterwards. but in this exercise it is the raw unedited version you see. it's good practice to try to write it how i want it in one go. this round was no gem but i was happy with yesterday's prompt- familiar face
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Yes, I noticed.
You were quick to end the story, unlike yesterday's own, you wrote more words.

Keep having fun while free writing.

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