VIBES WEB3 MUSIC COMPETITION WEEK 30 || Dax "Dear God" [Song Cover]

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Hello guys..
I would love to share with all the beautiful souls we've got here, a song cover I made for Vibes Web3 Music Competition Week 30. Its been amazing all through the moments I have spent engaging in the activities taking place in the community and I feel so happy and fulfilled whenever I am able to participate.

Today, the song I'm presenting is tittled Dear God, the song is an Hiphop song and one of my favourite rap song, Dax is one good rapper I always listen to long before now and I enjoy most of his track, Dear God was a song heard way back at a time when I came to see my brother at home to just check on him, then I over heard the speaker with this song and as a lover of good music that I am, I went ahead to ask for the name of the song and the artist, from then, Dax became one of my favourite rapper and I have gotten to know many more of his songs even more than the person who introduced me to him. I'm glad I could be able to share my amazing cover with you guys here. My respect to @verbal-d for all the work you have been putting on here, pushing us to the better version of ourselves, I'm grateful to be a part of that race, regardless of how hard it may seem sometimes. I'm grateful for this opportunity, May God bless us all.

                         LYRICS 

Dear God
Dear God, there's a lot of questions that I have about the past
And I don't want hear it from a human you made
So, you're the last Person that I'm ever gonna ask
Tell me what's real, tell me what's fake
Why is everything about you a debate? (Why?)
What's the point of love?
Everytime I've showed it, I was broken and it's forced me just to only wanna hate
Why's there only one you, but multiple religions?
(Why?) Why does every conversation end in a division?
(Why?) Why does everybody want to tell us how to live, but they won't listen to the same damn message that they giving?
Tell me how to feel, tell me what's wrong
I tried to call, pick up the phone, I'm on my own (pick up!)
Everybody said, you're coming back, then man, why the hell's it taking so long?
Why do I hurt? Why is there pain? (Why?)
Why does everything good always have to change?
(Why?) Why does everybody try to profit off another man's work, then destroyin' it just for monetary gain?
Tell me, are you black, are you white?
I don't even really care, I just really want to know what's right
They've been saying one thing, but I've been looking in the book
And it seems like they've been lying for my whole damn life
Tell me where I'm going - is it heaven or hell?
I just hope this message greets you well
Had a dream that I was walking with the devil
Don't remember how it feels, but I swear that I remember the smell
Looked me right into my eyes and told me, "Everything I wanted could be mine, if I gave up and decided to sell"
But I said I'd rather die than give mine and now, I'm here
Now I fear one man with a story to tell
Dear God, where were you when I needed it
When I fucked up and repeated it?
When they set the bar and I exceeded it? (Where were you?)
My life is like a book that they've been judging by a cover, but have never took the time to fucking read the shit
I remember telling you my goals and my dreams, but you didn't even answer, so, I guess you didn't believe in it
I remember sitting with a gun to my head trying to ask you for some help, but I guess you didn't believe in it
I don't want religion, I need that spirituality
I don't want a church, I need people to call a family
I don't wanna tell my sins to another sinner just because he's got a robe and he went to some academy
I don't wanna read it in a book, I wanna hear it from you
Don't wanna learn it in my school because they're hiding the truth
Don't wanna talk about it to another fucking human being, and that's only reason that I even stepped in this booth
Dear God, how do I take this darkness and turn it into light?
How do believe in a concept, where I speak to a man I've never seen with my own two eyes?
(How?) How do I know that religion wasn't made just to separate the world, and create a whole disguise
Just to keep us in these chains, while the rich get richer and the poor pray to you, and perpetuate a lie?
How do I know this ain't some big joke?
(How?) How can I have faith when there is no hope?
(How?) How the hell does one man have 100 billion dollars and we still have people on the street that are broke?
There's a lot of things, I wanna talk about, and get off my chest
I can't sleep 'cause the devil won't let me rest
I used to know a fucking pastor in a church, and I can still hear the screams of the kids, he would fucking molest
Dear God! Do you hear me?
(Do you hear me?) I'm supposed to fear you, but you ain't said shit
So, maybe it's you who actually fears me?
I don't know the answer, I just want to see it clearly
So many lies, there's a thousand different theories
All I want to know is, who really made religion 'cause I know it wasn't you but though nobody believes me
No more lies, no more death
Bring back King, bring back X
Please dear God, let their souls rest, protect who's left and watch their steps
Dear God (dear God, dear God)
I don't want to have to ask you again
I just hope that you know, that I'm still a believer, so, I'll end this all by saying Amen
It's Dax

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Hi like seriously I'm still still surprised at the way you took your time and get this lyrics because it's never easy and I love the kind of energy you use in singing this song wow kudos bro bravo keep up the good more energy to your bones thank you

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I'm glad you find my presentation very interesting. I had to put in a lot of work, thank you for coming around.
I will do more

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God love you and has a plan for you! Do you believe in Jesus?
You have great talent! Blessings!

!MUSIC
!BEATCZ
!LUV

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Thank you so much for coming around.
I believe in God and I know he loves me, and he's plans for me shall sholy come through.

I appreciate 🙏 💛

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The lyrics of the song hmmmm 🤔. You did a beautiful presentation.

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No fear o. The lyrics are not harsh as ot may seem, it's just a voice yarning for understanding from God.
I'm happy you find my presentation interesting.

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Oya oya come collect your flowers jare
This is what we call shut down and shut them up
Kudos I can't say it all

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My boss, you made me smile. I don collect your flowers package for somewhere special. Thanks for coming round and being supportive.

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Abeg hold am tight make my leg strong I dey come collect so that I go use am propose to this girl

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@scottykriz,the lyrics are powerful.
That was creative.
You really did a good job.
Amazing.

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Thank you very much. I'm happy you like my presentation.

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You are skilled in both writing and rapping,
Keep the flame 🔥 burning.
Don't ever be discouraged.

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Bro you're a pro, incredible one boss
I throw salute 🙌

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Aiii
My oga, am really grateful. I still wan try pro up so I fit reach you na 😊
Glad you came around

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(Edited)

This is your best entry to date,

Loved the cover song choice,
Your energy was completely different than any other entry you have given us

You have stepped out of your shell and opened up more of the potential you have to give a great live performance.

This entry was great because of the lyrical content and thoughtful rhetoric being used and the contrast of faith and hopelessness and wanting answers.

Your energy helped to deliver the song with good tonality, the flow was rhythmic but not perfect, you were off in multiple areas slightly, memorizing the lyrics would help a lot, it is definitely possible, these are minor things to work on for the future, your breath control is another thing you have to focus on so you can inhale quickly enough to spit and rap the whole lines and not rush over them, which also affects your delivery pronunciation and technical transitioning

Overall I liked the attitude, the content and the effort. A big improvement indeed, more body language, and interactive performance with facial expression and vocal dynamics of loud, quiet, and sound bending melodically will further enhance your performance level/. Keep practicing and experimenting with your flow.

-@Verbal-D

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Thank you so much sir.
I will take note of all you have said and try to work on them. you actually filtered all the issues I had creating this track. I will try to do better next time and I am very happy to confirm my improvement. I very excited to know that you like my entry. God bless.

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