TEST CYCLE "ORIGINAL SONG" - VIBES MUSIC COMPETITION WEEK 37
For week 37, I know we have a theme to follow. However, I have a very strong message I need to pass.
Also, I'm on original Songs journey.
This particular one has been in my drafts and I need to clear it.
The song is titled "The cycle"
The cycle exists in every area of our lives.
The cycle works in a patterned way which doesn't permit a change.
To be different, you have to pass through and break the cycle.
The lyrics of this song says a whole lot about the cycle.
I hope you enjoy this one.
Thanks.
LYRICS
The struggles
The shame
The sorrow
The pain
Survival for a penny
struggle for gain
What a cycle
Now I'm a psycho (2x)
I saw a piece of the cycle
Waiting to roll in over and over
Repetition
The cycle goes on and on.
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You're not a psycho in Jesus name 🤣🤣🤣 but come and teach me how to sing original song... This is really beautiful and congratulations on your win last week!!!❤️❤️❤️
I'm not the psycho, its a lyrics that might be relatable out there 😆
The songs comes by inspiration
Brutal hermano, esto se escucha es genial. Vibras alto con tu música, saludos. 🙋🏽♂️
Gracias amigos
Congrats on your win last week, you are now showcasing more of your original music and we are here for it, keep it going and flowing, the beat instrumental choice is so fire, I am already inspired by the chord progression and the overall feel of the emotion embedded into the music. This song is reflective of the fallen state of the world, and how we are trapped sometimes in these vicious cyclones of repetitive montonous and stagnating phases that weigh us down in our strive for greatness. Keep up the profound and poetic string of thoughts that you weave into song. Great entry
I appreciate this response brother.
Thanks for the encouragement.
I've still got lot of originals in my draft to roll out.
Also, I just picked up a couple of lyrics outta this beautiful comment.
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