RE: Rachel is back

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Oh! I felt the emotions in the story.

Rachel, traumatised! thinking she was deserted by her soon to be husband, now knowing that her husband has been consumed by the shadows of death, comes back to reality with tears on her face. Even when sad she was reassured that her husband never would have left her standing in that doorway where all her lifelong dream was about to be accomplished.

Great story dear!



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Thank you @zeegirl
Appreciate your feedback,
Yeah the trauma and the pain is what this is about.
Have a great day!

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