Remorse Within: A Poetry
(Edited)
Living in reclusive
Phase...
Cut off from life
& soulful living,
We tend to seek
Meaning,
A touch
A yearning.
So soul
Deep.
The first step
Is hard & harsh,
But so is the reward.
Our pains,
So bitter...
That thoughts
Shudder...
To live with
Joy...
Free of suffering
Is every soul's
Yearning...
But alas
The pain
Of separation
Remains within...
& so does the cycle
Of remorse.
End
Subject: Some poetic ramblings about life, remorse & pain in general.
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I feel the cold tone. Pain and loss is part of life, I think it gives life more meaning.
Also, I like your one word and phrase usage in the lines, I should try this style too.
Thanks for writing