RE: Vibes Web3 Music Competition wk20|| Original Song Titled OBLIVION

This was a beautiful and powerful entry and original song.

You're insecure, but you put it on me
My beauty is hidden with your scars
I almost drowned my heart today
You were my poisoned wine
I knew but I went on drinking
You've moved on to the next stage
But I'm still here sinking

These lines were my favorite from the song, very deep, relatable and moving.
Lyrics that touch the soul and help us reflect ob what’s important and who we surround ourselves with.

I still feel this song is somehow under development. But i know that with time, you will perfect it and I look forward to that release one day. There are still some unfound melodies and lyrics waiting to unfold. There is more to be said. Maybe you see and feel it too.

But this was inspiring.

On a spiritual level, I just want to say
Be careful using the word “my” when referring to demons, because it is like a verbal contract of claiming association or ownership of them.
If you are referring to your flaws faults or vices, or bad habits. Use those words instead of “demons” would be my suggestion, because in the spiritual word, claiming “my demons” is exactly the kind of thing the enemy wants us to curse ourselves with. Like we bind ourselves to them.
But remember, life and death is in the power of our words and
Whatever is loosed on earth is loosed in heaven, whatever is bound on earth is bound in heaven.
God bless you and your sister.