Incomplete Without The Other Half

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Stay.
If that's what you expect me to say, you're wrong.
Our relationship meant nothing to me.
I can't say that, I loved you.
And to be honest,
I hated you.
I would be lying to myself if I said,
I want to talk to you.
Why is everything so different now?
You might have an answer to share.
But before you do,
Leave.

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This is really good! Honestly, I was not expecting the reversal of the entire poem, it's brilliantly executed. It does a great job reframing everything. Although it leaves me to wonder; is the second half from the other lover, or is it just another side of the same lover who spoke the first half?

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ByIt is the same lover writing a letter to his other half reassuring his unwavering love always .

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