Of the Uninspired
Of the Uninspired
Beyond the light you stayed,
and in the shadows strayed.
Always a whisker from reach,
Over worn and loosely frayed.
Sheen on skin would glow,
and life would ebb and flow.
Your fire would start hearts,
But little did they know.
For on the breeze you flew,
and over mountains blew.
Along the streams unknown,
To all excepting you.
Through the streets the chase,
and across the skies a race.
The sparks followed the flame,
Burned dark across their face.
Will you ever grow too tired,
and let them have life unfired.
Will you stop the games you play,
That leave them all inspired.
Why end when I am so near,
and take what they want to hear.
When I can instead provide,
Giving them all they fear.
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A powerful poem portraying inspiration as a fleeting, untouchable force it sparks hearts, stirs emotions, then slips away, leaving behind longing and mystery.
Wow!
How good that you're a poet too!
And if I comment with another poem?
Don't die
Don't let the light stop embracing your footprints.
Don't let the breeze stop caressing your petals.
Don't let the smile fade.
Smile, despite the grays and the shadows.
Don't let the silence torment you.
Seek silence as one seeks the melody of a flower in its caress.
And smile at it as you go.
Then sing, always sing, even if you don't know how to sing.
Then bathe in the rain,
walk barefoot
regardless of what others say,
regardless of the time
and the path.
Don't die
while you're still alive.
I really enjoyed reading your impressions of life in the form of a poem. I haven't been following you for very long, and I don't know if you've done this before or if you also write poetry. In any case, I repeat, it's very enjoyable.
Facing life's complications and problems will always be difficult. For me, it is almost the line that has defined my life, especially in the last 25 years.
Your poem, while acknowledging these conflicts, offers a hopeful and comforting vision. Thank you.
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This poem really touches the heart as it's full of emotional memories. It feels like it's talking about someone or something powerful that keeps moving just out of reach like inspiration that sparks others but never stays.
Dear @tarazkp !
I guessed that you are conflicting with a person close to you!😯
The poem is really fantabulous and conveys a very powerful message about facing the challenges which come in your way rather to choose the ease because everytime it's not possible to step behind from a situation!
The spirit of the poem is really very powerful, it was just amazing reading it, you write mind blowing!!
The sense of wonder
should always be there under
that leaf that looks funny
kind of like Buggs Bunny.