RE: The rare sun

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Thankyou for sharing your poem. It captures a universal experience—the desire for happiness and the patience required to attain it. Especially ystriiking is the use of imagery and symbolism. The references to rain, the sky, the sun, and diamonds evoke vivid visuals and metaphors for joy and longing. well done



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Thank you so much @saltycat, you have it said all the poems entails. The comments is brief but it capture the whole point of view. Yes, every season has a rare benefits, and on what any season does, we hardly find it in another, we should be with joy with all seasons. The deal is, there all comes with a benefit, and if we can't see the benefits, someone else where will see it. Have a great day ahead.

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