RE: The Darkest Obsession
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I just stumbled across your story. It is part of a multi-part story I suppose?
I'm also currently writing one - for Hive. So naturally I was reading your story with a huge amount of curiosity to find out how I might improve my story. I realized it probably is a lot easier speaking from the perspective of the main character, rather than speaking as a narrator, especially if you have plenty of interactions with other people. Since I've only published 2 chapters so far, I'm thinking about just changing the style of my story in this regard. It wouldn't be a very elegant way of doing things - but it would probably improve my comfort in writing.
Anyways, keep writing! I really enjoyed reading your story. I might give your page a deeper look soon to read the prior parts of the story. You have some great writing skills!
Yeah, i think you can call it a multipart story. Idk but it’s in chapters and it has a beginning 🫠.
What story are you writing for hive?
And writing as a narrator is very cool too. If that’s what you started with, then maybe find some books rhat are written in third person to help you out. There are a lot of amazing books like that. I can help give recs if you wouldn’t mind. If you’ve already started like you said nd want to change, it’s not too late as you hve just two chapters down.
And Thankyou so much for your kind words, Ive been doubting myself for days and this just brought some enthusiasm to my soul. Thanks for commenting