RE: Scholar and Scribe Invitational - Winter Miracle on New Pohjola
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What a great story, I loved how they face the machines. With the dialogues you express the tension of the situation. Excellent. I enjoyed it.
Regards @alonicus
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Thank you - I'm still trying to get dialogue right, it's the part of my writing that definitely needs the most improvement !