Fixing my bad drawings, before and after

Hello everyone, so now i am doing that thing where i go back and fix some of my previous drawings that i can tell looks really bad.
look at this one, the right one is the one that i posted a while ago. it kind of looked like shit.
i redrew the drawing and i think it looks a lot better now.

let me know your thoughts.

i started by drawing a better head shape on top of the drawing that i will use as guide and then i didn't like the band so i removed it. as soon as i did that the drawing looked twice as better.
then i fixed the nose the eyes and the lips and the redrew the whole body. before it was just cloths and now you can see the physical shape.

see below: