CONTEST Zapfic50 Shelf

He collapsed on the stool, after looking around, hid his face in the palm of his hands.
The winter of the stove allowed a contradance of the flies.
Through the half-open door, from the shelf that was used to store provisions, a rodent would peek out, from time to time.



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El taburete, un símbolo de cubanía...!!
The stool, a symbol of Cubanness...!!

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Me encantó ese microrrelato y el rejuego que hiciste entre él y la fotografía.

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Gracias, a veces cuando no se dispone de recursos hay que ponerse creativa una...🤭🤭🤭

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Tienes un excelente manejo del relato corto. Magnífico 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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Gracias, tengo esa tendencia de redacción breve.

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