RE: Teacher's are role model
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Your poem has a heartfelt and meaningful theme — the impact of a temporary teacher who wins the hearts of his students. The emotions are genuine, and the storyline is easy to follow. However, there are a few areas where improvement could make your writing stronger:
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Thank you so much. Teacher's impact are felt in class, that is exactly the essence of the poems, have a wonderful day.