RE: [ Eng - Spa ] If she were | Si ella fuera
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If she were all this and more
there would be no reason to be
these sad verses
of painful agony
This really hits right in the feels my dude.
At first I found the poem quite contradicting but I was hit with quite the plot twist at the end that made sense of it all.
Wonderful poem my dude! Keep it up :)
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Thank you so much for your kind comment! It's great to know that the poem resonated with you, I have to admit that the contradiction at the beginning of the poem was on purpose to later give it a twist as you perceived it very well.
Thanks again for reading my poem and sharing your impressions!
Have a happy and productive start of the week!