RE: Literary Game Number 7 - The Huntress
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The Gothic tone is perfect, and I love how you wove in elements of mystery and dread. That last line about her intent 'not to kill him, but to drive him to madness and despair' is spine-tingling. Really well done.
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Thank you ! The last line was pretty much straight out of the game that inspired the story. My character's job was to try to help defend Lucius; we failed, and he was indeed driven to despair....