RE: Leo's Fragment
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Bravo, @wrestlingdesires! Your story flows smoothly as if it was effortlessly written but we writers know a fine piece like this takes some dedication.
Leo and Polly are fascinating characters, and more alike than they realise. I almost applauded Polly for taking the revelation of Leo's true nature in stride not expecting that she harboured a secret of her own, one that could bring her and Leo closer. What a great twist!
I'm rooting for this couple and hope Nardo and Anna won't mess things up for them. 😄 Beautifully written as always. Thank you for posting your fiction in the Scholar N Scribe community. !PIMP
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I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks so much for the compliment ♥️
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