RE: [ Eng - Spa ] Drifting ✍️ A la deriva

almost 2 years ago

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I admire the way you explore the themes of loss and nostalgia in this poem.

Your use of vivid imageries like "longings of my solitude" and "absence of yesterday" are deep, touching and display the hopelessness that comes with loss. The last stanza is haunting and heartbreaking. You capture the emotions of separation that "the sand of time,
that gives no respite" can take away.

This is deep, raw and moving! Beautifully written. !LUV 🙂

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@luvshares 58

almost 2 years ago

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@jakim7 71

almost 2 years ago

Thank you @kemmyb for taking the time to read my poem and for writing me this touching comment! I am glad to know that my poem succeeded in conveying to you the emotions I wanted to express by exploring the theme of loss and nostalgia.

It was my intention to use vivid imagery to help readers immerse themselves in the sadness and hopelessness that can accompany those emotions. I am honored that you consider my poem to be profound, raw, and poignant. I truly appreciate your words, and thank you for your time in writing this comment.

Best regards

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