RE: The Long Barrow - Scholar and Scribe Invitational

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Then they heard another sound, as the skeleton started to slowly rise from it's millennia-old slumber.

At this point, I wouldn't want to be a part of this team. The student that got away is lucky! 😄 Oh my, this is a gripping piece of horror. The slow build of tension and vivid description of the skeleton sent chills down my spine! Well done. Thank you for participating in the Horror/Mystery Edition.



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Thank you ! Adding the mystery element made it much more challenging (and fun) to write. Just doing a pure slasher is easy, but building up tension when you've got less than 1500 words to play with is surprisingly tough !

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