An Underground Weekend

Nothing should have gone wrong. The air was bright but cool, sunny but without heat. Joe had taken the girls to spend a weekend in Disneyland. And it was a perfect time to relax and do a few choice things for myself. That wasn’t to say that I didn’t want my husband and kids around. But, Joe, bless him, could see the dark circles under my eyes from a mile away. He suggested that he took the girls out that weekend, and knowing that he did it mainly for me, I obliged.

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I had my whole weekend planned until the last minute. And of course, my day could never been without coffee. Yesterday, I bought my favourite coffee brand from a store downtown. I’d never been there before but after my visit, I decided that I would frequent the store. Sure, it was way too glossy for my tastes, but the staff were overly nice to customers. Too nice.

Tearing open the protective seal on the coffee packet, my eyes immediately see the tail of a paper peeping out. I draw it and gasp at the hastily writer words on the shabby paper.

Help me! I have been stuck in this factory for a decade!

What in the world??

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My first instinct was to call Joe. He always knew what to do in confusing situations. But then I stopped myself at the last minute. If this was some sick joke, I’d hate to worry myself about it and imagine cutting short the girls’ trip for a prank. I’d never forgive myself. So I put down the receiver and thirty minutes later, I was on my way to the authorities.


“Do you have kids, ma’am?” The uninterested man looked at me from behind his spectacles.

“I’m sorry, Sir, but I fail to see what that has to do with anything?” I responded, seething.

He smiled at me. A patronising smile that said he dealt with delulus like me, every day. “It’s a simple question, Mrs. Hardin. Do. You. Have. Children?”

I bristled to the tips of my boots. “Yes, I do but-”

“Exactly! Your kids must have played a prank on you. This paper is a trick as old as the book. I remember in my days. Gave my pops-”

“I’m sorry Sir but my little girls could never be like you. May I have the paper back please?” He shrugged at me like he couldn’t be bothered and I snatched the paper from him.

A thought suddenly struck me as I stepped outside the station. The coffee packet was sealed. So that means whoever this person was worked in the factory that produced this coffee. Quickly, I took out the packet and dialled the number on it but it was unreachable. But, I wasn’t deterred although I knew where my final bus stop was. As much as I wanted to admit otherwise to myself, I could only pull off Nancy Drew for so long.


I walked up to one of the overly smiley salespeople at The Sun Mall and motioned her to the coffee aisle.

“May I know who supplies this coffee to you guys?”

If I hadn’t been watching her carefully, I would have missed the widening of her eyes by half a millimetre. Certainly not much because she schooled her features a nanosecond later, but I saw it. And I know what I saw.

“No ma’am, we just receive the deliveries. None of us would know.” She replied flightily and scurried away.

Now more than ever, I knew something was up. But what? I waited and watched the staff. The problem was, they were watching me too. But they would slip up soon enough. Instinctively, I pulled out my phone and video-called Joe to see how he and the girls were doing. I watched the staff from the corner of my eye and found a little door that they slipped into intermittently. It was so inconspicuous that an onlooker could mistake it for an ordinary wall.

I made more coo gestures at my phone and once I noticed that the staff had visibly relaxed, I dialled Dee, my friend from college who was currently working in a Detective Agency. After explaining what I needed, I hung up, shared my live location with her and went through the door. It was darkly lit. Cursing myself for my impulsiveness, and hoping Joe didn’t have my head for taking this risk, I followed through the narrow corridor till I got to an elevator at the end.

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Stepping in, I found a single button and pressed it. And then I started screaming, 'cause I suddenly started going down. It lasted all of thirty seconds but I saw my life flash before my eyes in those seconds. The door opened to see hundreds of people working in what looked like a factory. Their heads were bent and there was an air about them. An air of hopelessness. And then they noticed me and gasped. Three seconds was all I waited before I heard the overhead sound from helicopters. It was a whole ruckus. People rushed about and then, Dee and her team burst in, ordering everyone down.

Two hours later, I had a steaming mug of coffee in my hand as the mystery of the underground factory was revealed. The workers were immigrants who were promised to be set free after a year of working. But they never let them go and for ten years had made them work without pay and without seeing the sun. Luckily, arrests had been made.

A scrawny man walked up to me and after asking if I was the one who got his note, hugged me, muttering thank you a thousand times. Wiping the tears from my eyes after the rescued people were carted to safety, I picked up my phone and dialled Joe.

“Babe, I hope you’re seated because you wouldn’t believe what I’m about to tell you.”

Jhymi🖤



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Thank you Buzz🌺

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You're on fire @jhymi! Your daily posts are keeping Hive lively and exciting.

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Detective Mrs. Hardin to the rescue!
Most certainly, Joe would believe everything she'd tell him, as he clearly would know his wife very well to pull such Dare Devil escapade.

Whoever was behind that shady business would have said something like, "I would have had may way and gotten to the top of Forbes' list if not for you and your meddling guts," to Detective Mrs. Hardin while she sipped her coffee.


Yet again, you have delivered something excellent and brilliant, as always. I enjoyed reading this one very much. Such a delightfully crafted piece of writing, Fangy.

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"I would have had may way and gotten to the top of Forbes' list if not for you and your meddling guts"

I see someone is a Scooby Doo Fan. I usually looked forward to when the bad guy's true identity is revealed.

as he clearly would know his wife very well to pull such Dare Devil escapade.

I don't think Joe has any choice but to believe. Like you said he knows what his wife is capable of.🙃

I'm glad you like my story, Minion. And maybe you can decide to take up underground exploration if you want?🙃

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I was a big fan of Scooby Doo. The show, alongside many other cartoons made my childhood fun.

And, oh yes, Joe does know what his wife is capable of. Very much.

Anywhere you'd like to go, Fangy. Take me there.

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I do believe that there can be an executioner capable of doing this kind of thing to people in great need. I am glad that justice was done in your story.

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I also wonder if executioners like that exist but yeah, I'm pretty glad justice was served and they were rescued. Thank you for your warm comment @verdesmeralda🤗

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Your story is very entertaining, an underground factory where immigrants were enslaved, the ending is very exciting.

Thanks for sharing.
Good day.

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Thank you very much dearest @rinconpoetico7. I'm glad you found the story exciting. Do have a wonderful day yourself.🤗

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It was a huge pleasure participating.🌺

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Now this was so interesting to read, Lol my friend you’d make a good wife🥰🥰

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I hope my future husband sees this. Thank you sweetie. I'm so glad you like it.🤗💕

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He will🥰🥰

You are most welcome!

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Your story is interesting, I kept reading wanting to know what happened next. I was literally playing all the scenes in my head. It was brave of you to walk through the inconspicuous door.

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Yeah, it was rather brave and I feel like my character is intrigued by Mysteries no matter how much she denies it. I'm glad you like it.🌺

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They really dedicated time and effort to the construction of that subway factory, well I guess in this life everyone manages as he/she can, your writing has been very entertaining, greetings.

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Yeah, I guess that is true. I'm glad you found the story entertaining. Thank you so much for taking the time to read.🌺

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What a carefully crafted piece! This is delightful Jhymi. I really enjoyed it. Only you know how to weave a tale this good. Beautiful!!!!

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She called me, Jhymi.🙂
Glad you liked it sweetie. Thank you so much for stopping by.🌺

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Lol. Sorry. I’ve just been in a weird head space. Besides, I’d rather not reveal your name to the world. I mean… you’re all my heart 🤧 I don’t like sharing 😮‍💨

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It's okay. I totally understand. You'll be fine okay?🤗

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That's a lot of event's in a 5 minutes read 😂😂😂

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I loved reading your story, very original. Sending the location was a great decision, otherwise you might have been caught in the factory as well. Thanks for sharing dear @jhymi . You write very well. A big hug from Maracay.

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I'm glad you liked it. And yeah, I had to make the character not appear dumb, because entering without at least sharing your location is exactly that. Thank you so much @irvinc. I appreciate your warm comment.🌺

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Wow, what an interesting read. I can see her mouth moving to gist her husband haha. His reaction will be priceless.

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I'm sure her husband would enjoy that kind of gist. Things like that should be interesting to one's partner. Lol

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Hehe, it sure will. I can imagine how her mouth will be moving and how her husband's face will be.

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This was such an interesting read, so believable. I admire your daring nature because I don't like mystery. Maybe I would start now seeing that Mrs Hadin came out successful.

#dreemerforlife

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Start now and I hope you can dare the risks and come out successfully too. Glad to have you here @beckyroyal🌺

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Thanks and i am glad to be here as well @jhymi . I will consider what you have said o🤗

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Beautiful. The imaginations that are cooked up, spilled and interwoven into words from you are remarkable.💕

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Thank you sweetheart. Happy to have you here.🌺

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🤞🏽 In good time😁 it's always my pleasure dear💕

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Wow !!! Detective Hardin. You are a superhero. Thanks for saving those people. I enjoyed every part of your post.

Thanks for sharing this.

#dreemerforlife

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You're welcome @rukkie. So glad you love the antics of Detective Hardin.🌺

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It's good that the note reached her, otherwise more years would have passed and those people would never see the light. It's amazing how you suddenly become a detective.

#dreemerforlife

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That's true. The note was lucky to find itself in the hands of someone compassionate enough and that was willing to take the risk.

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