RE: R3D Meat

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I love this story, @litguru. The ballerina move was spectacular (and the image you created to illustrate that scene is SO cool).

One thing that surprised me was that even though Katya said she didn't like meat or anything remotely meat-like, and he promised he would never concoct a meat look-alike for her again, he still proceeded to make a faux-meat dish for her. But it worked! And he won her over.



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Thank you, @jayna! It's wonderful to read your insightful take on my story.

One thing that surprised me was that even though Katya said she didn't like meat or anything remotely meat-like, and he promised he would never concoct a meat look-alike for her again, he still proceeded to make a faux-meat dish for her.

It looks like these two began playing a cat-and-mouse game from the get go. The chef serves the meat and upsets Katya, who's suspicious of his motives because she knows his reputation as a meticulous chef. She then practices her dance routines in front of him and pays him a visit in the kitchen in her outfit. He promises not to do it again, but she is not convinced, either because she doesn't believe him or because she has other plans. She calls people who eat meat 'animals', but then she tells him, "show me what it's like to be a hungry creature." There was an additional segment that I edited out from this section, and it went some thing like this.


"Show me what it's like to be a hungry creature," she said, her feline eyes locked on his.

"You mean you want to try my...?"

"Be careful what you say next, Chef."

Nolan cocked his head and nodded with a slight smile.

"I'll prepare you a dish right away," he said.


I decided to edit this part out that shows Katya's willingness to try it, and perhaps you sensed this additional missing context 😊

As always, a pleasure to read your thoughts.

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