RE: 5 minute freewrite 2997 prompt contemporary
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I don't think the song is very good. I like the sentiment, but it seems hastily written and unpolished. That's fair enough considering the immediacy of its message, but the rhymes, meter, and analogies all need work.
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I guess I used the wrong word, I should have used, relevant.