RE: It all began with the letter

thank you for your feedback. I can see what you're saying about rushing emotional moments and adopting simple familiar patterns and I'm grateful you pointed that out. This piece came after a time out from writing so I guess that's why it appeared so, although I've been reading a lot of fictional stories. I guess I'm still finding my voice and I'll incorporate your observations in subsequent posts.

Thanks for taking your time to point these out.