Vibes web3 music competition week 33

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Greetings you all, lovely people
I'm thrilled to be here once again in this vibes web3 music competition week 33, happy easter my people. I'm grateful to @lordbutterfly for this wonderful opportunity he's given to us to sing💜, thank you so much 🥰

Here is my entry for the week.

1 Holy words long preserved
for our walk in this world,
They resound with God's own heart;
Oh, let the ancient words impart.

2 Words of life, words of hope
give us strength, help us cope;
In this world where'er we roam
ancient words will guide us home.

Chorus:
Ancient words ever true,
changing me and changing you;
We have come with open hearts,
oh let the ancient words impart.

3 Holy words of our faith
handed down to this age,
Came to us through sacrifice;
Oh, heed the faithful words of Christ. (chorus)

4 Martyr's blood stains each page,
they have died for this faith;
Hear them cry through the years;
Heed these words and hold them dear. (chorus)

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Thanks for entering in the contest, however, your sound quality needs much improvement, the music is completely overpowering your voice, I can barely hear you singing with headphones on, and the music is quite loud and distorted and the klanging piano notes hurts the ears, it would be better to add the instrumental directly to the video itself using a video editor app or to record with a music video app that has the music already inside as you record your entry.

I hope you can improve your performances and presentation. I kindly suggest that you sing with more engagement and passion, add more volume to your enjoyment of the music and just let yourself feel it truly and deliver it carefully, until that natural tone becomes second nature.

Best of skill to you.

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Thanks for the notes I will try and do better

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This song is really beautiful and it just flows with the Easter program

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