Steam

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Hellfire inside bellybutton and the back of her neck
Likes swollen breasts press-up against grazed knees
Breathing low. And fast. Unable to see.
High-tide to the bosun
Bare feet dangling over the edge, polish-chip
She invites not knowing, skin-shedding,
Greedy.

It's her trial by fire, it's exploratory foreign fingers
It's digging inside her mouth, probing for cavities, for golds
For previous men she might've kissed.
It's jealousy made palatable, made logical, made matte
Her young skin is nothing if not matte.

In women circles, which she harbors great resentment for,
She commiserates. Wouldn't be caught sprawling nude
Not in grandmother's eyes. Sinners beget sinners,
Forget when the postman arrives, lace up the apron,
Dust off the loveseat. Where? Sit why, when you can lie
On the floor, in the dirt, under nightsky?

Thankfully, she is not always amongst women.
Can't bear the scent of them, the sex of them for long.
The needling and tongue-tying, the sensible shoes
When she was born barefoot, and all the woods knows it.

Nighttime. High-time, In the candlelight, showtime.
She's greedy on the witching hour.
Takes the burning all for herself, inside herself.
Likes to think it of herself, only the steam gets to be too much.
Of what she's tasted of desire, and licks her lips and tastes again.

Across the street, all windows are gone dark.
She'll kiss the feet of the one who put her here.
She'll give thanks for hot water.

Towels it off. Descends. Relives.

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The needling and tongue-tying, the sensible shoes
When she was born barefoot, and all the woods knows it.

I love, love, love this and really identify with it! There's that tension between traditional, stifling 'culture', the expectations imposed upon us, and the rawness of what your speaker desires to be, closer to her own nature, primal. Constraint versus wildness, rawness.

I love how feverous it is, giving a sneak peak into your own intense and unapologetic (mostly) desires, or at least the speakers, as if there's much of a difference between them. There's that shameful yet rebellious cycle - the idea of sinning versus the a kind of freedom that can be found in the 'witching hour' - the dark night that woman often stretch out in because the daylight is full of judging eyes.

Night, yin, women, soft - day, yang, masculine, judging, hard.

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Nice poem, I can feel the tension between your wild, natural self and boring societal norms.

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Ah! There's so much to take from this. The passion, culture which must be maintained and all. The intensity you feel. It's... well done.

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I really liked how you used the body as a canvas here. I was also struck by the barefoot in the woods line.

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Fascinating... I quite like how the imagery can oscillate between being rather tender, and being raw as hell.

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There is sophistication in your exposition. Good contrast of ways of life. Nice concept to begin with.

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