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Hmmm! This is so sad.
Everyone has experienced grief in their own different ways.

This poem shows an undescribable grief of inner pain which is portrayed in silence.

You wanted a title, perhaps I would call it :
"Buried in Every Breath" or
"The Ache That Time Forgot"

I hope this helped.

Beautiful poem by the way. Well done



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Thanks a lot @happy080 I really appreciate your response and title suggestions,God bless you!

Yeah, it's a sad poem

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