Extreme chocolate love

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Julia returned from the office late today, at around 10-30 pm She went to her bedroom to sleep, and she saw Renaldo lying comfortably on the bed and sleeping carefree.

She had already seen that both the kids Tipsy and Ruby were fast asleep in their bedroom.
Julia very slowly reached the bed so as not to disturb Renaldo and lay down on the other side, she turned off the light and turned on the night light. There was a little light in the room and then she also started trying to sleep.

She was tired after being busy with office work all day and soon she fell asleep, but she had just slept for a while when she felt someone walking near the kitchen, and she woke up. At first, he thought it must be his illusion, but when he listened carefully, he heard the sound of some object hitting inside the house.

She was sleeping so she got a little scared, she looked at the time on her mobile phone screen and found it to be 2 o'clock.

She thought in her mind, who would be interested inside the house so late in the night, because there was only one door to come inside her house, and she had locked it with her own hands after coming from the office. For a few minutes, she lay in confusion suppressing her excitement. But she didn't understand what to do.

Kept analysing the situation silently for some time, and then she thought that maybe it was her delusion, and she again closed her eyes and started trying to sleep. Then there was a loud sound from inside and it felt like something fell on the ground.

Her sleepiness again went away and she became completely alert now.

She jolted Reynaldo, who was sleeping next to her, awake and said,
Hey listen, there is someone inside, I am very scared.

Poor Renaldo woke up from a deep sleep and rubbing his eyes said, who will be inside the house so late in the night, go to sleep.

Julia said, no, I clearly heard the sound of someone walking, and something inside fell on the ground.

Both got up with courage and reached the inner part of the house and were filled with wonder to see the inside view.

They saw their youngest daughter, Ruby, only 3 years old, sitting nervously by the refrigerator, and some salmon spread out on the floor.

Seeing the younger daughter Ruby near the fridge so late in the night, both the husband and wife lovingly asked her, what happened my baby, what do you want?

Ruby said very innocently, "Mummy, I am not getting my chocolate ice cream, yesterday I kept it here, my sister Tipsy will eat it after waking up in the morning, so I have to eat my chocolate ice cream at night ."

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Both husband and wife burst out laughing, and they came out of the freezer and gave chocolate ice cream to Ruby, Ruby's face glowed with happiness as soon as she got the ice cream. And she started eating it with great relish.

Actually Ruby loved chocolate ice cream very much, and she did not want to give it to her sister too. That's why she used to wake up at night and search for food.

The couple also went to their room and slept again.



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Author intrusion is a frowned upon technique because it assumes that the mechanisms of a story need to be explained to the reader. It assumes that the reader needs guidance, that the story doesn’t stand on its own and that readers is too stupid to work things out for themselves.

In this story you provide three paragraphs of “author intrusion”.

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