Must...Finish... ~ Original Haiku
Last night before going to bed, I wrote
but I must finish
this haiku
めがおもいでもおわらせるこのはいく


As I've written before, I try to make myself write at least one haiku everyday. I don't really think most of them are very good, but I write anyway. That's not me being modest, just realistic. Even the best baseball players rarely hit much above .300 (that's a 30% hit rate for the baseball illiterate). To continue the baseball metaphor, I don't take so many swings because I'm expecting to hit them all, I mostly just want to stay in the habit—and I enjoy writing them too.
Last night I was tired and ready for bed. It had been a long day. But then I realized I hadn't yet written any haiku for that day. So I pulled out a notecard and ... sat thinking. And thinking. And thinking. I might have nodded off a few times in there.
Then, it came to me, and I wrote down the above. And almost immediately went into the bedroom and fell asleep.
A little meta, perhaps, and playfully, but some haiku are both those things. Issa, who is generally considered the one of the greatest haikuists of all time, wrote some 20,000+ haiku in his life—which works out to several every single day of his adult years—and many of them were meta too, so I'm in good company.
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David is an American teacher and translator lost in Japan, trying to capture the beauty of this country one photo at a time and searching for the perfect haiku. He blogs here and at laspina.org. Write him on Mastodon. |
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Haha, that's a good one. That is pretty admirable that you do one every day. I admire that.
Thank you!
It's creative how you expressed your feelings and intentions through this haiku. I haven't written any poems recently... I should try pushing myself too. :) Have a good one!
You should try!
keep persevering
Will do!
You forced me to do some research and reading:
https://thehaikufoundation.org/
Ooo am I getting you interested in haiku? Any day where I can spread interest in this wonderful poetry form is a good day for me.
That's a good site to read! I know many of the guys there and have written for them before. It's a good organization.
Yes, you are.
Not that I didn't know about the art in the past, but you are definitely re-kindling my interest.
That shows some great gumption! Keep at it, it will keep your mind sharper as you age!
Let's hope!
I believe it is the ability to keep going, a very important ability in anything we do. I will take those words to heart.
I'm glad you could get something from it!
A good one to stamp the habit of writing daily. What a way to be disciplined even though your body is not in top-notch performance.
Man, the commitment is real! I love how the haiku itself is just a snapshot of that exact moment; tired, but pushing through :-))