For all the right reasons
(Edited)
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You touched my soul like a pill
diffusing into my bloodstream
the feeling engulfed me
I felt it take away my burden
as if it is being carried into the Pacific
now i feel terrific
Terrifying and satisfying
to have found the one
you healed my aching soul
you are the one that sings to my heart
I need you in my life for the purest reasons
to love and adore you
let me love until time tells the world
with me it is patience, grace and caring
with me you are loved right
let me make you a promise
I will love you as my darkest secrets
to protect you until my lights go out
what do you say?
let me love you
for all the right reasons
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Your words are deeply moving and beautifully express the healing and transformative power of love. Keep up the good work!
thank you
Actually, in these words, I see more than love, I see a valuable reminder to stay true to ourselves and ensure that our motivations are aligned with our core values without getting caught in the external pressure.
But please correct me if I misunderstood your feelings and what you truly wanted to express.
you've done a good job with this interpretation. it took a sight different angle but it conveys the message perfectly.
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