The soulless pill/Zapfic240[Eng-Spn]

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Greetings, participating in the initiative #ZapFicMonday: This week: ZapFic240!

This week's prompt is: “pill"

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Juan's pill time is at 2 p.m. I tried to remember every day; however, that day my mind wandered, my steps were slow. In my leisurely walk, I looked for the pill, and when I got to his bed, Juan was there, but his soul was not.

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Prompt: A man lying in bed, desperately waiting for a pill that a woman standing in the doorway is holding.
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A Juan le toca su pildora a las 2 de la tarde. Intentaba todos los días recordarlo; sin embargo, ese día mi mente divagaba, mis pasos eran lentos. En mi parsimonioso caminar, busqué la píldora y al llegar a su cama, allí estaba Juan pero su alma no.

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Promt: Un hombre agonizando en la cama desesperado esperando una pastilla que una mujer parada en el marco de la puerta tiene en sus manos.
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Gracias por compartir tu minicuento con nosotros.😘🙏👏👏👏🌹🇨🇺

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Le tocaba partir a Juan, esa mujer que no se sienta culpable, sólo paso esa vez. Me gusto.

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@cositav Ya su alma se fue inevitablemente, como a todos nos tocarà algùn dìa...un fuerte abrazo.

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Anybody can make a mistake. 🙃

Un saludo Yolernis.

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sentir escalofríos de muertos es muy triste
y confuso .

un abrazo fuerte y suerte en estos concursos .

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That's so sad.
Sorry about that.
But I think his time was already up,with or without the pills.

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