BLOOD DEBT||A TASTE FOR VENGEANCE|| Inkwell week 215
Harry is a very handsome young man with a good statue, he works out at least 7 days a week, he looked super hot and was admired by everyone.
Harry was every ladies dream man, but Harry only cared for one lady, Alice.
Harry and Alice met at high school, they became so close that they were almost inseparable. They proceeded into the same College, studied the same course and graduated together.
Mean while, there is Megan, she was also a student of the same high school as Harry and Alice, Megan was in love with Harry but Harry was in love with Alice. She did everything within her powers to get Harry to love her back, including trying to seduce him a number of times, but his love for Alice was too strong. Megans obsession for Harry grew so strong that she follow him all the way into the same College, to her greatest surprise, Alice was there too.
Megan began to plot ways to permanently get rid of Alice, she figured that if Alice dies, Harry might mourn for a while but eventually he'll get over it and at that time she might have a clear shot to win Harry over.
Megan created different plots against Alice while they were in college, but Alice had to be alone for the plot to be successful. Alice was never alone, she either has her bestie Ruth with her or her hubby Harry. This made it impossible for Megan to go through with her plans.
Time flied, Alice and Harry have finished their course in the college, during her graduation party, one thing led to the other and Harry and Alice became intimate for the first time.
3 weeks later Alice started noticing something weird was wrong with her, then she knew she has taking in. She called and told Harry about it, thinking he'll chicken out on her, Harry was rather happy, he took her out on a date in one of the most fancy restaurant in town, they had a wonderful meal, then he persuaded Alice to go grab somethings from the bar, when she came back she couldn't find Harry, she was surprised, she looked on the table and saw a note, she picked it and read, the notes said, walk upstairs to the VIP Lounge, she knew Harry was up to something but she couldn't warp her head around it.
She went upstairs to meet her man, when she got there it was dark, then suddenly the whole place lightened up, Harry was down on one knee, he said "Alice, you already know how much I love you, will you make me the happiest man on earth and be my wife? Alice was overwhelmed with joy, she didn't see it coming, but she eventually said yes.
The next day the news of Alices engagement circulated through out the entire city, Megan heard about it and grew more angry she vowed that even if Alice gets married to Harry she would still go ahead with her plans. End Alice and take her man.
Few weeks later, Alice and Harry got married they moved out of town for about 3 months for their honeymoon, when they came back, Alice was glowing, she became the talk of the town, everyone called her lucky for having such a perfect life.
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Soon Alice gave birth to a beautiful girl, she called her Elenore, Harry was very happy, he couldn't say two things without mentioning his daughter Elenore.
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Time flied Elenore is now 2 years old, so she started schooling, every morning Harry drops her off at school before he goes to work, then Alice picks her up at 2pm after school hours.
Megan saw this routine, she knew it was the only time Alice would drive alone, and so she set her master plan, where she would successfully kill Alice and get away with it, she intended to make it look like and accident.
The next day Alice drove to pick Elenore from school, Megan missed her on her way to the school but waited for her to come back.
So on their way home from the school, Harry called on video via WhatsApp as he usually do, they were discussing and laughing when Alice pulled up suddenly, it was a T-junction and there was a mis-parked truck hindering her from driving home, Harry asked Alice to switch the call to the front camera so he'll see what's going on via the wheel screen. Alice did so and left the phone attached to the wheel screen, she also wore her ear pod so she could stay on the call while she stepped out of her car to confront the owner of the wrongly packed truck. To her greatest surprise, it was Megan that owned the truck.
Hello Megan it's been a while, how have you been, Alice asked politely, Megan turned and said to Alice; you took everything I ever desired away from me in my very eyes, put me in your shadow, I watched you steal away my dream man, but today I'll repay that debt. Alice didn't know what Megan meant, meanwhile she was still on the call with her husband, Harry asked Alice to get back into the car and take another route home, but Alice has had enough insults already, Alice laughed and said, so even after all this year's you still want my man, the thing there is, you can want him for eternity, while I keep him for eternity.
Alice was returning to her car when Megan used a log of wood to hit Alices head, Alice fell unconscious, like that wasn't enough, Megan pulled Alice back into her car, geared the car and set it on motion, the car slowly rolled into a big ditch and caught up with fire, Harry has already left his office in a hurry, he called 911 to report an assault on his wife, but this was before, Megan knocked Alice out.
Harry saw everything that happened via his wife's phone, he was really far away, before he got there, the police has already taken his wife to the mortuary, his kid was admitted in the hospital, he quickly rushed down to the hospital to see his daughter, when he got there, he found his 2years old girl laying lifeless on the hospital bed, the doctor diagnosed her with a chronic heart damage, and that to find a replacement heart for a 2years old is very rare.
Harry was so mad that, he reported Megan to the police authorities, when they arrested and interrogated her, there wasn't enough evidence to pin the death to her, Harrys words wasn't good enough, so they let her go, pending when they find a suitable proof.
Few days later Elenore passed away, Harry was so mad at himself, he blamed himself that he couldn't save his family, he wasn't there when they needed him the most.
He vowed that Megan must pay for what she has done, even it means he'll end up in prison or worst dead, all that was Important to him was to make Megan pay.
Harry calculated, if he went ahead to kill Megan, it will just end there, he'll have no one to channel his anger to, so he decided to do his things another way round.
Harry waited patiently for 4 years, Megan has now gotten married and has 2 kids, but she has moved out of the vicinity into her husbands house at Truce.
Harry tracked her down to Truce, he showed up at her door step one evening, he knocked and Megans husband Leo opened the door, seeing this strange man at the door, he asked who he was looking for, Harry said he's a friend of Megans and that he has come to see her. So Leo let him in and went to call Megan, when Harry came inside the house, he saw Megans kids play with their toys, so he went and join them. When Megan came out to see the friend Leo talked about, she was stunned and speechless for some time, Harry smile, with his arms across the shoulders of the kids.
How have you been Megan, it's been a very long time 😏, Megan was trembling in great fear she thought she has gotten away from Harry for good.
How did you find me Megan asked? I'm married now and I have a home, why have you come?
Harry responded, what other time is better to repay a debt than now when you have your own kids too, Leo overhead and noticed the tension in the air, he came out with Intension to calm everything, he said gentle man why don't you sit so we couldn't have a proper discussion, Harry sat down and said to Leo, you seem like a gentleman, how unfortunate for you, you got married to the devil herself, Leo wasn't sure what Harry was talking about, but no matter what his wife has done in the past, it stays there in the past, Leo thought to himself.
Look man, I won't have you come into my house and insult my wife, what has my wife done to deserve such hate from you.
Harry responded, your beloved wife murdered my wife and daughter 4years ago, I was going to kill her, but her death alone wouldn't make up for the loss and pain she caused me, so I waited and now I'm here to repay that debt.
Leo was speechless he looked at his wife who usually has a lot to say, expecting her to defend herself but she didn't say a word, rather she was crying.
Leo knew that Harry wasn't lying so he began to beg; common bro, there must be another way to settle this without anyone getting hurt.
Harry responded, I'm already hurt. You most certainly don't deserve what is coming your way but you get it anyway, Harry pulled out a pistol, aimed at Leo and said blood for blood, one head for two, two heads for four, that's the rules, that's how to repay a blood debt.
Leo reach for his phone and secretly dialed 911, he hid the phone so the police could hear the discussion. When Harry noticed that Leo called the cops, he shot Leo on the head, when Megan tried to run, he shot her on the leg, he made her watch while he killed her kids. Megan cried aloud, Harry said, now you have a taste of your own soup, he left quickly before the cops arrived, tho he was in deep regret, the kids didn't do anything wrong, they didn't have to die, but he did what had to be done to repay a blood debt.
But Harrys mission wasn't over, all he did was inflict fear on Megan and made her go through the same pain he went through when he lost Alice and Elenore, but Megan was left with only a bullet to the leg, Harry wasn't done with her.
The next week, it was the burial of Leo and the two kids, it was also the memorial of Harrys wife and child, making it 4years that he lost them but it still felt like it was yesterday, Harry planned his move so we'll that the burial date of Leo and his kids matched the burial date of his wife and child, that began to give him some sense of satisfaction even though he's not done avenging his family.
During the burial, Harry used a sniper rifle and took Megan out from a long distance away, after he confirmed his shot, he was happy that he has avenged his family.
Unknowing to him Megan survived the shot, though she was in a bad shape for a long while. She recovered after a year, she vowed to retaliate and do even worst to Harry.
THE BLOOD DEBT NEVER ENDS....
THE END....
That's a lot of blood and thunder in one read.
😅😅, I just vibe bro, sometimes I don't even know where to start but I end well 😅
What an interesting story
Still unhappy about how it all went down though
I thought Harry would kill off Megan and her family slowly
Thanks for your kind review, hope you enjoyed the story,😊
Bro that was the initial plan, till I remembered the community rules 😅😅, I had to chill a little bit 😅
God, so much vengeance and so much death unjustly done! Thank goodness it is fiction. Greetings
😅, Buenas tardes, I try to keep things as natural as I can 😅
You wrote up a storm in this story, @chiddy. It's 2000 words long but reads very fast and doesn't seem that long. You certainly provide a character with motivation, and you have conflict, a lot of conflict. This might make a good plot for a movie, or TV series. Unfortunately, it is quite bloody. As such it violates a number of this community's rules. We don't allow violence against children. We don't all graphic violence period. There are bodies all over the place in the story, and you are quite descriptive as you describe the different ways characters die.
Please review our guidelines on violence.
Thank you.
Thanks for your kind review, I'll make sure to take note of this rules when I'm writing my next story 😊.
I'm happy you liked the story 😊, it makes me wanna do more 😁.
This is remarkable and beautiful
Ignorance is not an excuse for bridging the rule's
Thank you so much
I understand, it won't repeat it self again
2000 words! Quite a long reading but interesting at every level.
Please follow the community descriptions as stated by the community moderator..
Thank you sir, I will make sure I don't go against the community rules in my coming stories.😊
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