RE: Ancestors (Original Poetry)
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This is a lovely poem, full of both beauty and emotional resonance. The use of sensory language, such as "blue light and white petals," "flavors," and "waves and patterns," is especially effective in evoking a sense of wonder and curiosity. The references to "the seeker" and "the adventures" add a sense of a journey towards something greater, and the overall tone of the poem is one of gratitude and hope.
@kriszrokk Thank you for sharing🤗
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Indeed, it's meant to uplift the human spirit to continue its adventurous journey in this realm and add new layers to the overall mosaic we refer to as consciousness. Thank you for your kind words @chelsie-b