RE: Her Chance At Happiness?

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The emotional arc of the protagonist Trace feels very realistic - her nervousness about meeting her estranged father mixed with anger at his abandonment rings true. her breakdown when seeing their resemblance is a powerful moment.



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You describe the writing arc quite wonderfully. I'm glad you liked it and thought of this highly. Thank you so much for taking the time to read.🌺

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