The Architect of Dreams.
Interesting exercise, my friend @hive-161465. Providing us with the elements, we should include metaphorically without referring to their name. Well, it took me a little extra time to decide where to start, and I decided to begin reading the silhouettes from top left to right. I also came up with a graphic design using a tabulated table, including the corresponding image in the first column and the relevant verse in the second.
The Architect of Dreams
 | I sat heavy in my throne of spinning wheels, |
 | and grasped the metal jaws to fix what was broken. |
 | I looked at the hand of fate, the shuffled deals, |
| waiting for a destiny that remained unspoken. | |
| 🍌 | I peeled the yellow smile for a taste of sweet, |
| 🍕 | and finished the cold triangle of melted cheese. |
| 💡 | Suddenly, a glass idea sparked above my seat, |
| illuminating the shadows with sudden ease. | |
| 🌵 | I walked past the prickly survivor of the sand, |
| 📓 | and opened the silent keeper of stories wide, |
| looking for a map to leave this land, | |
| ⛵️ | and board my white-winged traveler of the tide. |
Poetry Prompt: Poetry Prompt: Poetry Cubes
Cover image and prompt for the initiative.
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** day by day**,
to make our planet a better world.
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You used there pictures but the poem doesn't flow for me.
But then again i could just be reading it wrong.
You should read the initiative's requirements to understand its objective. Thank you for your comment and careful reading.
My point is about an overarching idea. But again my take on your poem may not have gotten your overall story being told in your poem.
What I wanted to convey is the process of an internal transformation: from the heaviness of routine to liberation through imagination or knowledge.
Hmm i see it now.
Good poem
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I really enjoyed all of the various references you had. The "yellow smile" was the first one that stood out to me, then I was able to appreciate all of them. The "sand survivor" and "silent keeper of stories" were also great. Very creative write!