Zapfic50 Monday - Invisible Terror

This post is my entry to the ZapficMonday writing contest for this week - the prompt is Invisible.

Enjoy !

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The girl stood, terrified, lost in the mirror maze.

She knew the vampire was toying with her, laughing as he hunted her down.

“Run, little mouse ! You’ll never see me. In this maze, I am to all intents and purposes invisible."

The girl made many reflections, the vampire none.

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For any of my friends (or anyone else, for that matter !) who reads this and fancies giving it a try, it's really fun and thought provoking. The rules are really simple;

  • The Freewriters Community has a Zapfic post with a writing prompt every Monday
  • Your response must be posted within 3 days in the Freewriters Community.
  • Please post a link to your entry in the comments section of the prompt post
  • Please use #freewritehouse and #zapfic tags.
  • The important one - YOU MUST use a word/character counter (if you search for word counter on the internet or in your phone's app store you will get a big choice!) wordcounter.net and include a screenshot. Entries without a screenshot will NOT be valid.
  • Please use the prompt provided as you see fit (use your imagination)
  • Try to tell a complete story if you can!
  • The story should be EXACTLY 50 words long.


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Wow. If it were me I would find my way out of there.

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Interesting!

Invisible until it is too late!

But how does he stop himself from bumping into things!?

!LOL
!LUV

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I reckon he'd find it easier - it's traditional for vampires to not show up in mirrors, so he's probably used to it and less likely to be confused by multiple reflections. Plus I reckon he built the place, so he probably knows the layout 😀

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Indeed!

He could even just navigate the maze using other senses.

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Muy interesante voy a intentar participar nunca lo he hecho primera vez

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