Writing Prompt - Help Me Get My Characters Out Of An Impossible Predicament !
I need your help !
In my response to yesterday's Mariannewest prompt, I put my characters into a really impossible predicament.
That's the problem with having a 5-minute deadline. I didn't think it through how I usually do. Silly me ! And now my characters are going to die.
So what I hope one of you wonderful people can do is come up with a story where you can save my characters' lives. There's an SBI in it for the best solution 😁
The prompt was "Don't Relax" and my response to it, the post that got these poor people into the situation in the first place, is HERE
So here's the situation;
- The teller, Inspector Chivers and Constables Smith and Jones are in the bank foyer.
- The teller is a hostage and is holding a button fixed to the desk.
- The button is linked to a massive bomb by the front door.
- The button has a strong spring, and the teller's strength won't last much longer. If she lets go of the button, the bomb goes off and everyone dies.
- If the three policemen move more than about 5 paces from where they are, motion sensors set the bomb off.
- The motion sensors also set it off if they are moved or disconnected.
- The police are ten paces from the door, and twenty from the teller.
- There is a back door to the bank (and safety) left open when the bank robbers escaped, but it is another thirty paces beyond the teller.
- The police have guns but no radios or mobile phones.
- It's set in very near future, so no weird science or magic !
Have I finally come up with a situation where all my characters inevitably die ? Can you save them ? If Smith and Jones have to be sacrificed but Chivers and the Teller live, it counts as a minor win.
To make things interesting, if no-one comes up with a solution by the end of next Monday, the teller's strength will give out and I'll write a gruesome sequel where they all die explosive deaths and their next of kin get the bad news 😁
I really enjoy the call to action on this one. I've pinned this as I'm about to step away to join the family and get to my dad duties, but I'll return to chew on this a bit tonight or tomorrow! (And maybe finish a late entry for the Alliances prompt)
This is interesting! Let me just see how all these play out cos all the possible scenarios I can think of makes the bomb go off and no radio presence 😵 I hope you don't get to write that gruesome sequel
This is fantastic. I'm going to have to get to it tomorrow, because my brain is much too sleepy already now; sun's down. But I love this. really great.