The Colony on Meranda IV - Part 24
This post started off as a one-off response to a writing prompt in the Freewriters Community. Then I wrote a part 2 (with the outcome literally determined by a coin toss).
But that naturally leads to a part 3, which is where this short series comes in. I felt that doing it in just one post really wouldn't give enough time to build up a bit of suspense 😀 Enjoy !
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Garrad was visible out of the corner of Dafang's eye. It was like he'd receded, just a mere irritant. Dafang was almost entirely focused on the hive mind of Meranda.
He'd acted as a repeater for Wardek's message that his mission had achieved the first part of it's objective. Something he was learning was that a telepathic message from someone or something he knew personally came through stronger and louder against the background noise that was the mental chatter of every living creature on Meranda. But the alpha Spineders always came through the loudest of all.
With Wardek's message passed to the community, the fear and sense of doom was changing. Dafang felt it as a kind of electrical expectancy, the slow, steady and inexorable build-up of a charge.
There was a distant voice... something external....
"Damn it, Governor, what the hell is going on ?"
With a wrench, Dafang found he could split his focus briefly. Most of his effort was still on the communication within the hive mind, but he was able to spare a little bit of effort for Garrad.
When he spoke, his own voice sounded vague, disconnected.
"Wardek has dropped a package, ASP-Brigadier. A single Spineder hatchling, now safely locked onto the largest Einheriar ship. It'll act as a kind of repeater. Watch."
The charge was ready. He didn't know how he knew, but he knew.
A Spineder voice spoke in his mind.
You are the focus, Dafang. Good luck.
He focused his mind on the Einheriar battleship. Then it was like simply flicking a switch.
The charge flowed through him. The will of every living creature in Meranda's hive mind, all focused on that ship. On the Spineder on the ship, sacrificing itself for the world.
The collective mental energy of a whole planet jumped through space like a massive bolt of lightning, so powerful it took physical form.
The battleship exploded. Not the kind of explosion you'd get if it was hit by a weapon. No, this was instantaneous, the whole ship became a total conversion bomb. Every molecule every atom, every quark and nilton was instantly converted from matter to energy.
The destruction was complete; the radius of energy was enough to swallow up the rest of the Einheriar squadron and vaporise every ship.
As his mind cleared, Dafang heard a dry voice in his head, a mental chuckle.
"That was close, but don't worry, it takes more than a pop like that to kill off old Wardek."
In an hour, Meranda would have a brief new nova in it's sky, brighter than the star itself for a few minutes.
Previous posts in this series;
- https://peakd.com/hive-161155/@alonicus/24-january-2025-mariannewests-freewrite-writing-prompt-day-2626-mother-love - the post that started it all, and introduced the spine-spiders
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/escape-from-the-caves-of-meranda-iv - the sequel, where the science team escapes back to base and recommends the planet not be colonised. They were too late.
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-1 - we meet the Governor Dafang and get the first hints that the colony isn't going to plan
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-2 - Governor Dafang takes a trip to the Greenfields settlement, only to find it is not there any more
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-3 - a fractious meeting of the co0lony's government, and a worrying foreshadow
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-4 - this is where things start to really go sideways for the colony
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-5 - Doctor Helen Thwaites returns to Meranda to reveal the cover-up
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-6 - Garnes tries to arrest Helen, and gets told to go away
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-7 - Meranda Base finds itself surrounded by a broad band of patterns
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-8 - Mr Garnes makes his move
https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-9 - Mr Garnes' juniors aren't impressed by his self-promotion
https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-10 - Wardek breaks Dafang out of prison, but Doctor Thwaites is swallowed up by the ground. - https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-11 - The fugitives use micro-drones to find out what Garnes is up to.
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-12 - Dafang finds out that Wardek was actually a senior NCO in one of the toughest units the Empire has
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-13 - Captured by Imperial Marines
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-14 - A whole battlecruiser goes missing
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-15 - Helen Thwaites makes a re-appearance
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-16 - Helen delivers the Spineders' demands
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-17 - Helen and Dafang go underground to meet the Spineders
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-18 - Dafang wakes up to find he's been absorbed into the Spineder hive mind
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-19 - The return to Meranda Base
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-20 - Garnes gets what's coming to him
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-21 - The Einheriar enter the picture
- https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@alonicus/the-colony-on-meranda-iv-part-22 - The Einheriar break through the Imperial defence line
Wow! Explosive action! Amazing weapon... now... with a weapon ability like THAT on display at the cost of merely a single Spineder hatchling... scary!
Thank you ! I had to think hard about how a hive mind would defend itself when it couldn't just undermine them, but also when humans and spineders started working together 😀
!BBH
Very cool!