Distance - A short poem.
See the clouds in the distance
Flowing in the sky doing their dance
Oh how life snuffs your existence
A blink of an eye in a trance
My eyes look on into the night
Oh what a sight
I'll miss you and reality has a hard bite
But you shine for me so bright
Tears run down my cheek
The smell of death, it does reek
I'm scared because I'm weak
My voice though is not weak
A spark of life
I'm not sure if includes strife
Cutting at my soul like a knife
I'll take and survive
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This is an amazing poem. I especially admire the way you arranged the lines and how you spaced the words.
Beautiful write up. Well done
Thank you.
Sometimes the words come and Sometimes they just fade into black
Sometimes all fit on my hand
Sometimes they stab me in the back
But I'm happy I'm still standing.
Heh
wow! Haha
There you go again. I am feeling your vibes
I really lieked the image of clouds dancing in the sky - they set the scene beautifully. I did feel like I waanted a bit more at the end - what does it mean to find one's strength? Overall a poem filled with vividness and raw emotion.