RE: Life.....

Hello @sweetmelody01,
Welcome to Hive and to the Inkwell Community.

I read this story with interest. You have a strong narrative voice. It carries a sense of history and of purpose.

It seems clear to me that you like to write. That's the best reason to post in this community, or any writing community. Those of us who love to write can see that inclination in others.

I suggest you read thoroughly the Inkwell Catalog of Fiction Tips. This is a guide to writing for a short story community such as ours. The 'tips' were written by @jayna, who leads this community. In the catalog you will find guidance about classic form and style--ex: story arcs, author intrusion, etc. As your writing skills develop you will likely find in the catalog information that will help you wherever and whenever you write.

I hope your journey on Hive is rich. There is much to learn and I'm sure you have much to share.

Happy writing, and sharing!